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@Yuichi - Nov 10, 2022
I was very empathetic. Thank you for sharing. 😊
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@dreeds - Nov 09, 2022
My friend, your blog post should be much more popular than it is!

The referenced video is great - thank you for sharing it!

Some suggestions to help you get more engagement:

- don't bury the lede (don't put the point of the post down low past the scroll)

- be specific right off the bat... not, "This video hit home with me because, while the struggles are from different worlds, they are still struggles that we had to endure...." but something more along the lines of, "This video is a great reminder to all of us to believe in ourselves and not feed into what other ppl say. Great story from a veteran who's been at the lowest of the low..." See the difference in how to grab a reader, make it specific and personal?

Anyhow, I wanted to say thank you for sharing this and offer some unsolicited thoughts on how to reach more ppl with your well thought-out content.
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@TeamGM - Nov 09, 2022
Thank you very much for the feedback. I haven't been writing very much for others consumption, so I am pretty green at it. I greatly appreciate the suggestion, and I will definitely work on that.
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